By far your best
This is the best from what you have up so far. It's an interesting listen. I've gone over it a couple times so far. The drop off in the middle seems a bit abrupt, maybe a crash or something would make it smoother, but I don't really think it is necessary. This thing stands on it's own as it is.
Thanx for the advice. glad u liked my friend - Olio
...but it would have been cool if it was longer. I know that is kind of against the point of it, but I still think it would have been a cool basis for a full length song.
Well there is actually a full length song, but i chose to only use a wee snippet of it cos its a tune my band and i made but i am no longer with them so i dont want ne complaints off them. -Olio
Pretty dang good
Just had a listen to this. It's quite good. I'll have to check out your other stuff.
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